Final piece

This is our final piece. We have gradually made changes based on the feedback from our target audience. This draft differs from Draft 6 in volume of the music. we chose to do this because when we showed a sample of our target audience, they said the music in the background was too loud, and that it was difficult to hear what she was saying. We have now corrected this. The music is now quieter when she is speaking, and louder when she is not. We have shown this version to the same people and they have said it is now easier to understand what is happening.

We also, upon receiving feedback from peers, changed the length of the title. This was because the audience couldn't read the title properly as it faded out too quick so we extended the length of the title at the end so the audience could read it. Whilst extending the length of the title we decided to sort out and fix the blue flicker within the title.
We are very happy with how this piece has come out, as we have been successful in creating the emotional affects that we intended in the audience. Certain aspects of this have changed from what we were originally planning, but we believe it still works.