First Draft

This is the first draft of our final piece. This needs a lot of improvements to achieve the effects we desire for the audience. We will make these improvements over the coming weeks. 

One of the changes we plan to make is to the title. The title used in this draft, was a drafted, animated title. We are still looking at alternatives for the title used in this draft. Our new title will hopefully appear in one of the few drafts to come. 

Another change we will defiantly be making will be the audio. We are missing backing music in this draft. The music will add to the sense of curiosity, and fear at the same time. It will also be copyright free. 

We also need to add the credits. Acting by Heather Paterson, Editing by Matt Bartram and Filmed by Rachel Nesbitt. These credits should appear within the first 2 mins of a horror opening, we plan to have ours appear within the first minute.